The High Tide at Gettysburg

Amanda Ingold

Will Henry Thompson is the author of this poem. He took part in Pickett’s Charge on July 3, 1863. He also served in the Fourth Georgia. His poem, " The High Tide at Gettysburg," describes the battle at Gettysburg from the perspective of a Southern.

A cloud possessed the hollow field,

The gathering battle's smoky shield:

Athwart the gloom the lightning flashed,

And through the cloud some horsemen dashed,

And from the heights the thunder pealed.

Then, at the brief command of Lee,

Moved out that matchless infantry,

With Pickett leading grandly down,

To rush against the roaring crown

Of those dread heights of destiny.

Far heard above the angry guns

A cry across the tumult runs,--

The voice that rang from Shilo's woods

And Chickamauga's solitudes,

The fierce South cheering on her sons!

Ah, how the withering tempest blew

Against the front of Pettigrew!

A Khamsin wind that scorched and singed

Like that infernal flame that fringed

The British squares at Waterloo!

A thousand fell where Kemper led;

A thousand died where Garnett bled:

In blinding flame and strangling smoke

Their remnant through the batteries broke

And crossed the works with Armistead.

"Once more in Glory's van with me!"

Virginia cried to Tennessee;

"We two together, come what may,

Shall stand upon these works to-day!"

(The reddest day in history.)

Brave Tennessee! In reckless way

Virginia heard her comrade say:

"Close round this rent and riddled rag!"

What time she set her battle-flag

Amid the guns of Doubleday.

But who shall break the guards that wait

Before the awful face of Fate?

The tattered standards of the South

Were shriveled at the cannon's mouth,

And all her hopes were desolate.

In vain the Tennessean set

His breast against the bayonet;

In vain Virginia charged and raged,

A tigress in her wrath uncaged,

Till all the hill was red and wet!

Above the bayonets, mixed and crossed,

Men saw a gray, gigantic ghost

Receding through the battle-cloud,

And heard across the tempset loud

The death-cry of a nation lost!

The brave went down! Without disgrace

They leaped to Ruin's red embrace;

They heard Fame's thunders wake,

And saw the dazzling sun-burst break

In smiles on Glory's bloody face!

They fell, who lifted up a hand

And bade the sun in heaven to stand;

They smote and fell, who set the bars

Against the progress of the stars,

And stayed the march of Motherland!

They stood, who saw the future come

On through the fight's delirium;

They smote and stood, who held the hope

Of nations on that slippery slope

Amid the cheers of Christendom.

God lives! He forged the iron will

That clutched and held that trembling hill!

God lives and reigns! He built and lent

The heights for freedom's battlement

Where floats her flag in triumph still!

Fold up the banners! Smelt the guns!

Love rules. Her gentler purpose runs.

A mighty mother turns in tears

The pages of her battle years,

Lamenting all her fallen sons!

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The poem describes the battlefield. It is smoky. Across the field, lightning flashes and through the cloudy field, a horseman comes riding. From the mountains, thunder roars.

At Lee’s command, the soldiers move out because Pickett’s men were rushing toward them. Pickett’s men started to fire at them, which made a load commotion. The Southerners cheer their men on as they fight.

The wind started to blow a hot, southerly, Egyptian wind like the hot fire at the Battle of Waterloo.

Many people died where Kemper and Garnett led their men. Through all of the gun smoke, only a small surviving group remained.

Virginia and Tennessee will have to work together in the war. More people died in this war than many other wars put together. Virginia heard that Tennessee was in trouble, so they went to help them fight. The South was starting to lose to the North. They were losing all of their hope, too. Virginia came to Tennessee’s rescue. They keep fighting until the battlefield was wet with blood. Through all of the gun smoke on the cloudy field, the South realized that their nation was losing the war.

All of the brave men died, but the people that were still living realized that the war was over. Many people died in the war. Now people were stopping their work to remember those people that died, fighting for their nation. People could now go on with their lives since the Battle of Gettysburg was over, but times would still be tough for them because the Civil War wasn’t over. All of the Christians were glad that the battle was over. God was with the soldiers during the war and helped them get through the battles. It is now time to put the war equipment away. A mother starts to cry as she remembers her sons that died while fighting in the war.

There is a lot of imagery in this poem. One of the best stanzas is "A thousand fell where Kemper led;/ A thousand died where Garnett bled:/ In blinding flame and strangling smoke/ Their remnant through the batteries broke/ And crossed the works with Armistead." It allows the reader to imagine the people being shot down. Also, the reader can see all of the people fighting and bleeding. Another one of the best stanzas with imagery is "In vain Virginia charged and raged,/ A tigress in her wrath uncaged,/ Till all the hill was red and wet!" It lets the reader imagine Virginia’s army charging toward the enemy and fighting with all their might until the battlefield is covered in blood. Last, "Fold up the banners! Smelt the guns!/ Love rules. Her gentler purpose runs./ A mighty mother turns in tears/ The pages of her battle years,/ Lamenting all her fallen sons!" is another good stanza. It explains the way they put all of the war equipment away. Also, it reminds the reader that family members will always remember their loved ones that died while fighting in the battle.

There is an example of alliteration in this poem. The "Men saw a gray, gigantic ghost" has the repeated "G" sound. It sounds like the soldiers are tired of fighting. The way the "G" sound is written makes it sound like the soldiers are moving really slow.

There is also personification in the poem. The way Thompson talks about Virginia and Tennessee makes them seem like real people because they are crying for each other and hear each other talk just like real people do.

The rhythm in this poem is like the footsteps of a soldier’s march. It has a constant beat. When soldiers march, they step to a constant beat and always stay in line. The rhyme scheme adds to the rhythm with a constant beat, too.

"A Khamsin wind that scorched and singed/Like that infernal flame that fringed," is a simile of a hot wind like a flame inside of humans. It is describing the hot wind on the battlefield. Also, it describes the weather and how the wind was blowing.

The mood and tone explain how tragic the war was. It was tough for people to deal with the loss of friends and family members that fought in the battle. These people risked their lives for their nation. The mood and tone are thought to be very sad and tragic because of all the deaths.

For information about this poem and author, go to the web page listed below.

http://users.erols.com/kfraser/hightide.htm

Secession Women in Custody

By Amanda Ingold

This is an article from a newspaper, written by a person that lived in the 1860s. It doesn't specifically say who wrote it but a person wrote this article after they saw what was going on at "Fort Greenough."

"Fort Greenough" as they call it, where the secession women are shut up, is an ordinary brick house of three stories, on sixteenth street, between K and I. As I strolled slowly by I could see very little indications of its prison character. A lazy sentinel was standing in front of it, to be sure, but he held his musket like an umbrella and was busy chatting with some gossiping friend. There was a chair before the front of the door, but the door was closed, the lower windows looked uncommonly dirty, and there were no bars at all. The women are restricted to the second floor, and as I passed some of them were visible.

In the yard beside the house there is a tall round tent, and soldiers' blankets and accoutrements hang on the fences and the clothesline, while idle looking men in uniform loiter about the premises as if they felt they had a right to be there. It must be rather tedious to have been shut up there as long as Mrs. Greenough has been -- some three months, I believe. She has never, during all that time, been allowed to go out, even for a short distance, and a request which she sent to the President some time ago to be allowed to go to church was refused. She is said to be an accomplished and fascinating woman, and one of the officers who was on duty out here is reported to have betrayed a degree of sympathy towards her which unfitted him for the charge.

Mrs. Rose O' Neal Greenough is being keep at "Fort Greenough." "Fort Greenough" is a place where secession women are keep in custody. Secession means retirement. The ladies that are shut up in the three story brick house can't leave. They can't even go to church. Greenough wrote a letter to the president requesting permission to be able to go to church but her request was turned down and refused. These are fascinating women, and they can do great things even though they are shut up in a house.

I feel that the significance of this article is to tell people how retired women are shut up in a brick house and can't leave. I feel that the women that are being keep in this house is for no reason. If they are going to keep these women in custody, the women should be able to go outside at least once a day. The women should definitely be able to go to church. Going to church is something they should be able to do week, not just once every three months.

I chose this article because it looked interesting that at the beginning of the war, retired women were taken into custody. This article was written on November 29, 1861. Some of the women were kept in there for over three months. I can’t imagine having to be shut up in a house for over three months and can’t leave. I also wanted to try to figure out why they kept these women locked up and they can’t even leave to go to church. Now I am starting to understand that they needed women do the soldier’s laundry and help however possible for the Civil War. I still feel that it was unfair and they shouldn’t have keep the women shut up. I don’t think that they wanted the women to just sit at home and wait for their family to get home from the war. They wanted them to work for them, too.

Bibliography

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